Is Barnabas Nkomo-Threlfall a real person

No. He is invented for this page, and so are Oakstile Corporate Services and Fenbrooke Retail Security. The figures show a shape and describe nobody's record.

What goes at the top of a security application

The licence, with its year. It is a legal requirement to work and the first thing a contract manager checks. The example keeps it in certifications with first aid and conflict management beside it.

How should incidents be described

As counts and outcomes. Forty detentions a year with no complaints upheld is a record of restraint, and 260 incident reports a year is a record of documentation. Neither describes a single incident.

What did the checker score it

97 out of 100, with one improvement remaining worth 8 points. The document has 191 readable words, and the volume rule's top band opens at 250.

Is CCTV work worth its own line

Yes. Ninety cameras monitored and 120 evidence packs produced for the police is a technical and procedural claim at once, and evidence handling is a skill a corporate client pays for.

Which design is this rendered in

Onyx, one of the 21 ATS-safe layouts out of 37. It sets a plain strong single column, which suits a page led by licences and counts.

Example · Security

A security officer résumé example, licence first

One complete security officer résumé, written out in full. The person is invented. The reading and the score come from the product itself.

ConxfolioPublished 2026-09-13

— licence, patrols, reports. calm is proved by the record.

The security officer example résumé drawn as a complete page in the Onyx design: name, summary, the roles with their bullet lines, education and a skills row — The example below, drawn by the builder's own renderer in the Onyx design. The picture was taken by pressing this page's own Use this example door and photographing what the editor rendered.

Security work is hired on a licence and kept on a record, and most résumés for it describe neither. This example is written out in full so you can read the licence-and-record version, then put through the tools here so you can see what a parser stores. The candidate is invented. Barnabas Nkomo-Threlfall does not exist, neither employer exists, and every figure was chosen to demonstrate a shape.

The example, in full

An invented person. Not a real document, and not yours.

Barnabas Nkomo-Threlfall
Security Officer
Birmingham, United Kingdom · [email protected] · +44 121 496 0512

Summary
Licensed security officer with seven years on retail and corporate sites. Works on patrols, incident reports and the calm version of a difficult conversation.

Experience

Senior Security Officer · Oakstile Corporate Services, Birmingham · 2021 to present

Led a team of 6 officers across 3 shifts on a corporate site of 1 400 staff.
Completed 12 patrols a shift and logged 260 incident reports a year.
Cut unauthorised access events from 30 to 7 a year by rebuilding the visitor procedure.
Trained 8 officers on conflict management and the site emergency plan.

Security Officer · Fenbrooke Retail Security, Coventry · 2018 to 2021

Patrolled a shopping centre of 60 units over 10 hour shifts.
Detained 40 offenders a year with 0 complaints upheld.
Monitored 90 cameras and produced 120 evidence packs for the police.

Education
BTEC Level 3 Public Services · Sparkhill Technical College, Birmingham · 2016 to 2018

Skills
access control, CCTV monitoring, patrolling, incident reporting, conflict management, evidence handling, emergency procedures, visitor management, team supervision, health and safety

Certifications
SIA Door Supervisor licence · 2024
First aid at work · 2024
Conflict management · 2022

The licence decides whether the page is read

A door supervisor licence with its year, a current first aid certificate and conflict management training. All three sit in their own certifications section, because a contract manager filling a rota checks them before reading a single achievement line.

Naming the year matters more here than in most professions. A lapsed licence is a candidate who cannot start, and a résumé that hides the date reads as a résumé with something to hide.

Counts, and the outcomes beside them

Twelve patrols a shift and 260 incident reports a year. Forty detentions a year with no complaints upheld. Unauthorised access events from thirty to seven after the visitor procedure was rebuilt. Every one of those is a count with a result attached, which is the only way to describe security work without describing an incident.

The complaints line is the one that matters. In this trade the difference between a competent officer and a liability is measured in complaints, and a candidate who states their record is inviting a check.

What the reading found

The door on this page hands the document to the résumé builder as plain text, through the same import an uploaded file goes through, and the review shows each field beside the line it came from. Here the completeness pass found four readable sections, 105 words of experience evidence and ten distinct skills, with all three certifications kept with their years.

The Conxfolio import review after the door opened, showing Barnabas Nkomo-Threlfall's example read into fields beside the rendered page, with the line saying it is an example — The real import review, opened by this page's own door. It names Barnabas Nkomo-Threlfall as invented before anything is saved, and it shows every field beside the line it came from.

Nothing in that reading uses a language model. Every string a reader emits is checked in code to be a span of the source document, and where the rules are unsure they ask instead of guessing.

What the checker scored it

The same import review on a 390 pixel phone screen, with the example notice above the accept button — The same door on a phone. Nothing is withheld on the small screen: the notice, the reading and the accept button are all there.

Ninety-seven out of 100, with one improvement remaining worth 8 points. The arithmetic is 100 × 30% + 100 × 30% + 92 × 40% = 97, explained in the article on the score. Seven action-led lines, three of them measurable, seven lines of depth, and 191 readable words against a band opening at 250.

Patrols, cameras and evidence packs are not units the evidence rule reads, so several counted lines here register as achievements without measurable evidence. The staff and shift figures are what it catches. The ATS checker names which lines it counted, so the page can be written for both readers.

What this example leaves off

No incident narratives, no photographs of sites and no description of any detention. The counts describe the experience; the details describe somebody else's worst afternoon and have no place on a document that circulates by email.

Military or police service is included where it applies but is not dramatised. A contract manager reads the licence, the record and the training, and a page written as a war story reads as a risk rather than as a recommendation.

What to change for your own

Change the site. Retail, corporate reception, events, construction and hospital security all use this shape with different risks and different licences. Then put in your own patrol counts, report volumes, incident outcomes and team size.

Keep every licence current and dated. The guide on certifications covers the placement, the design gallery holds 37 layouts, and the retail manager example, the cashier example and the warehouse example sit beside this one.

Write yours beside it

Opens the builder with Barnabas's example loaded, saved as its own entry in the Onyx design. Replace every line with your own. Free, no account.

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Questions

Is Barnabas Nkomo-Threlfall a real person: No. He is invented for this page, and so are Oakstile Corporate Services and Fenbrooke Retail Security. The figures show a shape and describe nobody's record.
What goes at the top of a security application: The licence, with its year. It is a legal requirement to work and the first thing a contract manager checks. The example keeps it in certifications with first aid and conflict management beside it.
How should incidents be described: As counts and outcomes. Forty detentions a year with no complaints upheld is a record of restraint, and 260 incident reports a year is a record of documentation. Neither describes a single incident.
What did the checker score it: 97 out of 100, with one improvement remaining worth 8 points. The document has 191 readable words, and the volume rule's top band opens at 250.
Is CCTV work worth its own line: Yes. Ninety cameras monitored and 120 evidence packs produced for the police is a technical and procedural claim at once, and evidence handling is a skill a corporate client pays for.
Which design is this rendered in: Onyx, one of the 21 ATS-safe layouts out of 37. It sets a plain strong single column, which suits a page led by licences and counts.

Conxfolio is a free set of four career tools: a résumé builder with 37 rendered layouts, an ATS résumé checker that prints its own arithmetic, a cover letter builder that traces every proof paragraph back to the line it came from, and a portfolio builder with 20 authored designs. There is no account to create, nothing is held back for a paid plan, and no language model is used anywhere in the product, so the readers, the score and the letter are deterministic code you can check.